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mohase
Bonjours tout le monde,
Mon anglais n'est pas super, c'est pourquoi jaimerais savoir si quelqu'un pourrait me corriger ma lettre.
Merci d'avance, vous me sauvez!
My dear friends,
As you know, I went a week ago to the place where I was born. I found it but I was suprised to see that it had changed a lot. In fact, the town is no longer the same, is no longer like I told you but it is a little bit like you told me, it is full of ghosts. Yes, I was a little bit sad to see it. However <it still> the district of my childhood is still there, I <have spend> spent so much time in its streets, I <have been> was loved there, I <have been> was educated there. The list is so long. So even if the town has changed, it helps me to remember this time of happiness.
My return was planned for yesterday so I went to the airport but I didn't take my plane as I told you yesterday on the phone.You know that I am an old man and I feel like I were attracted by this place.
So I stay here but not for one or two days, it's for the rest of my life. I love you but I have found here, like I said, <feelings> so deep feelings which make me feel young and give<s> me the force and the envy <of> to stay<ing> here. I have also met so adorable people <so adorable> who knew my family and day after day I find others who knew me.
I can't tell you how much <I am> happy I am. It will be hard without you but I will come every month and I hope that you will come to visit England and Blackburn.
<Fear for me does not have> Don't worry for me, be just happy for me. I will come very soon to visit you.
I miss you already, be happy and <benefit from the> make the most of life.
Your faithful friend, who loves you.
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