Sujet : aide en anglais

Comment s 'ameliorer en anglais?

Apprendre? comprendre? comment mieux réussir?

Alors à présent et si j'ai bien compris, ce n'est plus le Malawi mais l'Inde...

Envoyé par mona

Comment ça "sans commentaire" ? J'ai trouvé plus de raisons et j'ai mieux développé ça. Tu me dis si tu préfères ça ?

Je préfèrerais que tu ne commettes pas autant de fautes, y compris en français.

Merci de ta correction mais là aussi je crois que c'est rempli de fautes.

Hélas !

I would like to go with them because it's one of the poorest countrIES in the world who WHICH needS help.
There aren't many schools and all children can't study and learn.The rich ONES can go to school but not the poor ONES.
Again, when there are schools, school stationEry lackS like SUCH AS drawing pencilS, bookS, penS and eraserS but also educational personNEl : there aren't many teacherS because the country doESn't have a lot OF FINANCIAL RESOURCES/money to pay them.
Instead of going to school, children work in camp to bring their parents some money.
I would also like to go with them because OF theIR poor sloppiness MEDICAL CARE. They have just access to the governmental hospitals who WHICH are free but those hospitals aren't well equipPED. They need doctorS and bedS for patientS.
Medicines are free but they are in a limited number. India have HAS the best doctorS in the world but exceptionally for the rich PEOPLE and population THOSE who come from Europe.
The Indian population hurt of SUFFERS FROM a lot of illnessES like SUCH AS leprosy and malaria and someone of them die.
In many corner AREAS of India there is a lack of hygiene, Many people live outside : their clothes are tearn TORN up and holes that is because of the lack of accommodation owed DUE to a strong density of population.
The Water is uncommOn and expensive and the poor PEOPLE can't use it. the essencial thing who is do with it , it"s THEY ONLY USE IT FOR the farming of the rice.
The Poor PEOPLE eat just rice and beans in leaVES and sometimes they don't eat when there is not enough farming.
Those things make ARE all the reasons who WHY i I want to go with them to help develop this country and bring them some assetS who WHICH can make him THEM better.

Si à l'avenir tu ne fais pas l'effort de prendre en compte mes corrections afin de ne plus refaire les mêmes fautes, dont certaines sont carrément MONSTRUEUSES, je ne vois aucune raison pour continuer à t'aider.
D'autres que moi auront sans doute plus de patience.

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