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  1. #1
    Elève touriste
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    Par défaut Relecture résumé de rapport de stage en anglais

    Bonsoir à tous! je suis nouveau sur le forum et j'ai besoin de votre aide!

    j'ai rédigé un résumé de mon rapport de stage en anglais, je souhaiterais avoir votre avis. Donc si vous pouviez me relire pour corriger mes fautes cela m'aiderai énormément


    Merci et bonne soirée.

    As part of the Bachelor of Arts “Langues Etrangères Appliquées” (university language course with emphasis on business and management), I was led to do an internship of two months to validate my certificate.
    I worked as a trainee at *****, I found this internship thanks to an advertisement published on Internet.
    ***** is a very small-sized company with a workforce of 9 persons and its legal status is simplified company with shares. The company is located in Paris and is a marketing company specialized in the referencing of industrial products. The aim is to connect professionals having specific needs with manufacturers who are able to satisfy these needs. The company publishes a catalogue and has its own web site.
    Indeed, these last years the society developed its activities on the Internet, with its web site www.*****.com.

    During this training period, I held the post of " German international advertising executive " within the service of international advertising. My main tasks were:

    To give information and to advise the customers by the Internet or by telephone on the products of the society, that is to say to explain its functioning, catalogues and the web site
    To canvass, develop and secure the loyalty of a client portfolio of new prospective buyers on the German market. Over the training period, I contacted by email more than 800 firms of the German industrial sector, so as to suggest them a partnership between their firm and *****, to present their products on the web site: www.*****.com. The products presentation is free, but the firm partner must pay a 35 Euros cost for each contact transmitted to them by ******.
    To assure the after sales service regarding the products of the society. It was entrusted me in some case with the monitoring after sale, notably in litigations of the regulations of bills between French and German customers.

    To complete various missions and to reach the objectives, it was essential to put into practice a significant number of knowledge gained in the course of my training at the university, namely:
    - The common use of English and German (essential in international trade, particularly in Europe)


      • the major notions of marketing and negotiation (which allowed me to understand the industry field of the society and to better organise contacts with my various interlocutors)
      • the bases of commercial communication.


    The internship within ***** was not only personally (job performed in a multicultural environment) but also and mostly professionally enriching because it allowed me to increase my competences. Thanks to the missions realised independently, I could develop my sense of responsibility.
    It also allowed me to gain a better organization in my job as well as a bigger telephone fluency, particularly in foreign languages.

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    Citation Envoyé par rom1n Voir le message
    Bonsoir à tous! je suis nouveau sur le forum et j'ai besoin de votre aide!
    Romain, bienvenue sur Be-Students.
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    JRB
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    Bonjour Romain et bienvenue sur be-students.

    Quelques modifications et suggestions signalées en caractères gras.
    Excellent travail.
    (*) demande vérification.



    As part of the Bachelor of Arts “Langues Etrangères Appliquées” (university language course with emphasis on business and management), I was led to do a two-month long internship to validate my certificate.
    I worked as a trainee at ***** thanks to an advertisement published on the Internet.
    ***** is a very small-sized company with a workforce of 9 persons and its legal status is simplified company with shares. The company is located in Paris and is a marketing company specialized in the referencing of industrial products. The aim is to connect professionals having specific needs with manufacturers who are able to satisfy these needs. The company publishes a catalogue and has its own web site.
    Indeed, the society has developed its activities on the Internet these last years, through its web site www.*****.com.

    During this training period, I held the post of "German international advertising executive" within the service of international advertising. My main tasks consisted in:

    - giving information and advising the customers by the Internet or by telephone on the products of the society, that is to say explaining its functioning, catalogues and the web site,
    - canvassing, developing and securing the loyalty of a client portfolio of new prospective buyers on the German market. Over the training period, I contacted by email more than 800 firms of the German industrial sector, so as to suggest them a partnership between their firm and *****, to present their products on the web site: www.*****.com. The products presentation is free, but the firm partner must pay a 35 Euros cost for each contact transmitted to them by ******.
    - assuring the after-sales service regarding the products of the society. I was entrusted (*) in some cases with the monitoring of after-sales, notably in litigations of the regulations of bills between French and German customers.

    To complete various missions and to reach the objectives, it was essential to put into practice a significant amount of knowledge gained in the course of my training at the university, namely:
    - The common use of English and German (essential in international trade, particularly in Europe)
    ·


      • the major notions of marketing and negotiation (which allowed me to understand the industry field of the society and to better organise contacts with my various interlocutors)
      • the bases of commercial communication.


    The internship within ***** was not only personally enriching (job performed in a multicultural environment) but also and mostly professionally so because it allowed me to increase my skills. Thanks to the missions I carried out independently, I could develop my sense of responsibility.
    It also allowed me to gain a better sense of organization in my job as well as a greater fluency on the telephone, particularly in foreign languages.
    Dernière modification par JRB ; 01/09/2009 à 11h54.

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    Elève touriste
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    Merci beaucoup Jean pour cette correction, cela m'aide énormément!!

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    JRB
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    Citation Envoyé par rom1n Voir le message
    Merci beaucoup Jean pour cette correction, cela m'aide énormément!!
    Content de t'avoir aidé.

 

 

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