dada27

Points: 727, Niveau: 14

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Hello everybody!!!!

j'aurais besoin d'un petite correction car je doute d'avoir tout bon!!!

Voici mon sujet: What does Facebook want its users to do?
Facebook est un site web et ici je dois dire ce que l'on doit faire pour s'y inscrire en gros!

my text:

To start using facebook, people have to create a profile. Facebook want to have informations about its users. If you want to join this website, you have to give your family name, your date of birth, your email and your password. Also, users have to inform about their life: [the website ask if they are in college or graduate at school, in high school] , if they work at a compagny or if they are none of the above. Furthermore, users have to enter words which are a Security Check. Indeed, Facebook want to be sure that it is a real person which join the website and not a machine.

J'aimerais remplacer ce qui est en gras par une phrase plus générale en disant: Le site demande le niveau d'études des utilisateurs, mais je ne sais pas comment le dire.

Merci bien!!!!

Jean

Points: 1 116, Niveau: 18

Activité: 4%

Bonjour,

Les corrections sont balisées en majuscules grasses.

To start using Facebook, people have to create a profile. Facebook want to have information about THEIR users. If you want to join this website, you have to give your family name, your date of birth, your email and your password. Also, users have to GIVE informATION about their liVeS: they ALSO HAVE TO STATE THEIR EDUCATIONAL LEVEL, if they work IN a compANy or if they are none of the above. Furthermore, users have to enter words which are a Security Check. Indeed, Facebook want to be sure that it is a real person whO joinS the website and not a machine.