Bonjour,

Voilà, étant en seconde notre professeur d'anglais nous a demandé de rédiger un conte dans lequel il devait y avoir des répétitions, des verbes irréguliers et nottament une fin heureuse avec si possible une morale...Je l'ai donc écrit et traduit en anglais. Problème: je pense avoir fait énormement de fautes c'est pourquoi j'aurais aimé que vous me corriger mes fautes en espérant ne pas trop trop vous déranger...

Once upon a time, there was a prince whose name was James. The later was the most beautiful man of the village. James was renowned to be a seductor prefered the woman's beauty to their mental that explained so that he didn't arrived to have a relationship serious and he was single.
One late day, while he came back to hunting, he (aperçevoir ) a tower who he intrigued and so he decided to approach.
When, stunned and stupefied, he caught sight the sublime woman's shade. Pressed of the time, he couldn't look at her curves longe but he took the decision to back as possible. Besides, from the (levée?) of sunshine, he introduce himself bottom of the tower to meet again "his lady". Surprised to see that she wasn't here but persevering he decided to come back there later in the Monday's night. The moment come, while there were frightening wind, James (se précipita?) to the house of his beloved who was always in the half-light. The beautiful man, with a soft voice say her: "As you seen me so pretty, if you want to bring of warm to my heart, show-me your so lovely eyes!"
The young woman approach without never say and show him her eyes.
James was so happy and enthusiast at idea to see this woman's beauty that he decided to come back here each dayin order to conquer this woman so perfect for him. So, tuesday he came back and say him: " As you seen me so pretty, if you want to bring of warm to my heart, show-me your charming ears!" The young woman approach without never say and show him her ears.
Then Wednesday, always in a frazing cold, he say him:"As you seen me so pretty, if you want to bring of warm to my heart, show-me your smile so sensual!" The young woman approach without never say and show him her smile.
Thursday, he asked her: "As you seen me so pretty, if you want to bring of warm to my heart, show-me your small nose!" The young woman approach without never say and show him her nose.
Friday, like to his habit, he say her:"As you seen me so pretty, if you want to bring of warm to my heart, show-me your hair so silky!" The young woman approach without never say and show him her hair.
At last, Saturday he ask to his sweet: "As you seen me so pretty, if you want to bring of warm to my heart, show-me your hands so (fragile?)!"The young woman approach without never say and show him her hands.
Then, after a week, he decided to say her: "As you seen me so pretty, if you want to bring of warm to my heart, reveal you in your whole!" After hesitating for a few minutes, the young woman did her apparition. Suddenly, James discovered with horror the face of the woman. (En effet?) that he didn't know James was what is woman, called ''Greta'' was the uglyer of village, she was physically unattractive, (rejetté?) by a large persons, she had decided to shelter in a land far away so as to avoid continual and wounding mockings.
The young woman replied with a sweet and sentive voice: "You are the first person to come see me. Nobody didn't do a so beautiful declaration. In spite of, I show in your face your disappointement and I knew that your love for me will not lost. I am much too terrifying. (fuis?), you don't the first man to hurt me.
Luckily, the princedidn't leave, in fact, James was attached to this woman so sensitive and moving and replied him:
" I don't want to leave. You have me open the eyes, thanks to you I changed and I have enormous feelings for you!"
James ran to the woman and kiss her languorously. A few later month, the prince and his future princess got married. They had lots of children and lived happily ever after life.

This beautiful story of love, so we showed that physical don't an argument essential to found a couple, the mental and the (sentiments?) are lots of important and this is what James understood during this period...

Voilà c'est enfin terminé, j'espère que vous pourrez m'accorder un peu de votre temps pour corriger tout cela (au plus vite) meme si je suis consciente que c'est assez long...en vous remerçiant d'avance
Bonne journée